Friday, November 13, 2015

A Storm At Sea

My fiance and I just returned from a wonderful cruise to Progresso and Cozumel. It was full of neat adventures that I will have to write about sometime. Because of our recent voyage, I figured I would post a short story about the sea which I wrote for a contest a couple of years ago. The short story topic was "A Storm At Sea". I hope everyone enjoys it and I look forward to your feedback.


                                                                     "A Storm At Sea"

Steven and Angelica tossed about helpless as violent waves slammed against the sides of the ship. All around the boat, people shouted, clinging to the rails as the vessel sped across the turbulent sea. The wind grew fiercer. Passengers exchanged anxious glances. They were still a long way from shore. The storm had come upon the boat suddenly and before the passengers knew what was happening, a once peaceful family fishing trip had turned into a battle for survival.

Another hard wave hit the boat and the door to Steven and Angelica’s compartment closed again, leaving them stranded within the darkness. Though the two little ones were hardly capable of understanding the seriousness of the situation, Steven and Angelica could still hear the shouts and feel the growing agitation afflicting their fellow passengers. As they sat inside their small plastic compartment, they wondered if they would ever again see their home.

More waves racked the ship. The shouts of fear rising from the passengers grew louder. Steven and Angelica thought about their friends at school. Would they every see any of them again?

A sense of isolation crept in around them. They were trapped, stranded upon this tiny vessel, prisoners far from the safety of the home they knew so well. There was no one to save them. No one would come to their rescue. At any second, the cold hand of death could reach in and snag them forever from the world of the living.

More screams sounded. The door flung open again. They could see the driver, standing behind the wheel, his eyes squinting ahead at the approaching land. They could see the other passengers, wrapped inside their life vests, shielding their eyes from the spray of water cascading over the sides.

They were so close to land but the waves were growing bigger as they moved closer to shore. The boat was filling fast as salty water rushed over its edges with each fresh surge. The fight against the sea was not going in the small boat’s favor.

Steven and Angelica’s anxiety grew as the land in the distance grew bigger. They were so close now. A foreboding sense of dread gripped them. Then, a scream filled the air as a passenger pointed toward a particularly large wave rising above the boat. The driver let out a cry and tried to change the vessel’s course. They were too late. With a force greater than anything Angelica or Steven had ever imagined, the boat bowled over, toppling upside down into the sea.

Shouts of fear transformed into splashes. Steven and Angelica were hurled from their compartment into the salty waters. Plunged beneath the surface, they began swimming excitedly, looking around for the other people on the boat. The passengers and driver had risen safely to the surface. Waves pummeled the crew's fragile bodies. At any moment, they could sink.  

            The driver was shouting, pointing at a nearby boat which, having spotted their predicament, had changed directions. The passengers began swimming toward the ship, helping each other. No one looked back for Angelica and Steven. Forgotten amid the chaos, they watched as the boat’s crew swam away without them.

            The family’s ambivalence did not bother them, though. They didn’t care about the other passengers. They didn’t care about the water-filled ice chest sinking beneath the sea, which had served as their prison during the ride. They were content to just be back in the pleasant salty water.

            Turning their tails toward the rest of the company, the two fish swam away from the boat, away from the fisherman, and away from the nightmare of the last twenty minutes. Together, they swam home. 


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